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hi!I'm Zhao ZiwenBecauseI had a happy familyWhy?Because my dad isn't healthhe is angry every daySo I grow up can't drink alcohol,I can't! I'm only 13 old,but I'm clever I love building blocksThe very very large world!

修改后：

Hi! I'm Zhao Ziwen I love building blocksBut I'm very very sad nowHe drinks alcohol every dayMy mom is sad,too I won't!

I'm only 13 years old, but I'm clever The very very large world!

修改教师 ：Andy老师

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